Delicate, Earnest, Sweet
like the intersting opening, nice voice over-- "closest to the coat room"
(although) a little bit of voice or natural sound while "playing communityville" would be nice...
I am so glad the host is a dentist, I always like dentists! I take teeth seriously.
and dogs, who got the woof sounds?
Of course, me personally, I would be at the radio station. Is there a box for the radio station?
At any rate, the jobs inside the shoeboxes are very, very important.
I can't believe you used a church bell as the head of the town!
...because in America there is a seperation of church and state on purpose... still I admit, I enjoyed the music with the tweety birds at the end of the piece.
la,la,la,la,... .
Jen Curry
Greensboro, NC
July 22, 2008
Nine-year-old Madison looks back at the happy and creative days of first grade, when her class built an entire town in their classroom.
